What do you think about my novel?

To be honest it does need work and it is cliche, parents fight so she lives with her grandma. She will probably go to school and meet a nice boy and yeah, ive seen it hundreds of times. But for a thirteen year old, it's good. I think you need to work on your detail a little bit, and your paragraphs jump all over the place, but it's good so far, you just need to work and work on it.